Sunday, 10 May 2015

Reuben's Earthquake poem







Earthqake Poem by Reuben Room 18
Kathmandu
Shaking
Shaking
Shaking
City
Flattened
Flattened
Flattened
Buildings
Smashing
Smashing
Smashing                          Survivors
                                         Alone
                                         Alone
Avalanche                         Alone
Crashing
Crashing
Crashing



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6 comments:

  1. Mrs Morris10 May 2015 at 22:22

    Reuben, I like the descriptive verbs you repeated in your Earthquake poem...well done!

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  2. Shavaun15 May 2015 at 00:24

    I like your Earth qake peom reuben . did you know that katmamda has had another Earth qake.

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  3. Trelise16 May 2015 at 20:11

    Dear Reuben
    I like the way you said 'Survivors alone, alone, alone"
    Trelise

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  4. Azalea20 May 2015 at 22:05

    I like your poem Reuben because I liked the word Avalanche you used in your poem.

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  5. Anonymous4 June 2015 at 02:33

    Dearest Reuben. You have so many talents and poetry is one of them. Your Earthquake poem has been written so well and it feels like the emotion of a shocking repetitive Earthquake. GREAT JOB!!! from your proud Mother

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  6. Anonymous4 June 2015 at 02:38

    Dearest Reuben. I like your poem. The words sound like an earthquake because it repeats like the shaking. Do you know how many ancient buildings were destroyed? by Daniel

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