Thursday, 25 June 2015

A Winter Poem by Andrew

Winter is …
Freezing cold
Bears hibernating
Icy grass
Trees naked
Wet mud
Heaters on
Birds finding food
Time to get warm
Fingers numb
People freezing
Very very chilly

by Andrew Room 18
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9 comments:

  1. Mrs Morris25 June 2015 at 20:51

    I like the way you have described Winter in your poem, Andrew. You have used descriptive words like chilly and freezing. Well done!

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  2. Anonymous28 June 2015 at 20:40

    Winter is all those things, Andrew. I love your story!

    Trelise

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  3. Josh Smith28 June 2015 at 23:07

    Well done Andrew. Good poem. I like it. From Josh L.S

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  4. Josh Smith28 June 2015 at 23:08

    Well done Andrew. Good poem. I liked it. From Josh L.S.

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  5. Elizabeth29 June 2015 at 12:54

    To Andrew
    I like your poem very much.Do you like winter?

    Elizabeth

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  6. Azalea29 June 2015 at 20:29

    It must be really cold in winter Andrew. Do you feel cold in winter.

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  7. Daniel30 June 2015 at 01:01

    I like your poem because all those words describe winter.How much do you like winter? by Daniel

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  8. Shavaun8 July 2015 at 23:32

    I like your winter poem Andrew

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  9. Unknown14 July 2015 at 14:35

    love your story because all those words describe winter!

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