Thursday, 25 June 2015

A Winter Poem by Elise

Winter is…
Warm hot chocolate to drink
The sun beaming brightly on the grass
A lovely cool breeze swishing on your chin
Gorgeous frost on the grass
Dressing warmly and snugly
Putting a fire on
Freezing cold it is
Birds searching for food
I like winter!
By Elise room 18










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6 comments:

  1. Mrs Morris25 June 2015 at 20:55

    A great Winter poem, Elise! I like your verbs swishing and beaming. You used adverbs too...warmly and snugly.

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  2. Anonymous28 June 2015 at 20:44

    I like your picture, Elise! That's so cool!

    Love Trelise

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  3. Elizabeth29 June 2015 at 13:02

    Dear Elise
    I really really really love your poem.Is winter your favorite season?

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  4. Azalea29 June 2015 at 20:46

    I really love your story Elise. Great work!

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  5. Anonymous23 July 2015 at 20:59

    Great work Elise, keep it up!

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  6. Shavaun14 August 2015 at 13:06

    Great work Elise I like the way You said Freezing cold it is

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