Tuesday, 18 August 2015

Edible Gardens by Elise

Edible Gardens




An Edible Garden is where you grow plants. An Edible garden is where you grow plants like strawberries, potato, apple and chilli.
Compost
Compost helps our Edible garden grow.
Protection
Plants need protection and so does our Edible Garden.


What our garden needs
Our garden needs sun,rain,good compost and water.
I think we should have an Edible Garden at Sunnyhills School!


by Elise room 18

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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 August 2015 at 21:27

    Dear Elise
    I like the way you told us lots of details. Excellent!
    From Trelise

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  2. Elizabeth25 August 2015 at 12:51

    To Elise
    I love your story. I love how you put headings. You wrote an AWESOME story! I love it.

    Love from Elizabeth


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  3. Anonymous25 August 2015 at 23:11

    Dear Elise

    I like how you put in your story that plants need compost and protection.

    From Jasmine

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  4. Daniel30 August 2015 at 21:58

    Dear Elise I like the way you first put in what it was about like Compost. Awesome Work!

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  5. Reuben30 August 2015 at 22:27

    Dear Elise I like they way you done paragraphs your work is awesome!

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  6. Azalea2 September 2015 at 22:39

    Dear Elise I like your Edible Garden story because I agree with you that Sunnyhills school should have an Edible Garden!

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  7. shavaun4 September 2015 at 00:57

    Dear Elise I really like the way you did headings for each parigragh great job
    from shavaun

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  8. Anonymous19 October 2015 at 21:51

    Dear Elise
    I think your story
    is awesome do you know
    any more plants that grow in Edible gardens

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