Sunday, 16 August 2015

WALT persuade: Bullrush...should it be banned in schools?

Bullrush by Azalea
The game begins with two children standing in the middle of the
field. The other children stand on one side of these children. They have to run across the field trying not to get tackled or tagged by the two children.
Bullrush should/ should not be banned
I think Bullrush should be banned from schools.
The first reason is your parents could get very angry and tell the principal to ban Bullrush because you got badly injured.
The second reason is you could dislocate your leg or your shoulder by someone stronger than you that has tackled you.
The third reason is you could get serious brain injury and would not think very well at all
and you might not think very  properly for your whole entire life.
Ban Bullrush from our schools!
                                   
                                      

                               
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12 comments:

  1. Anonymous18 August 2015 at 21:39

    Dear Azalea
    You got amazing reason. I agree with you. Awesome!
    From Trelise

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  2. Elizabeth27 August 2015 at 23:22

    To Azalea
    You great reasons...and I agree with you. You wrote an AWESOME story


    Love from Elizabeth

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  3. Reuben30 August 2015 at 22:18

    I think you done great reasons! I agree with you . do you know when bulrush was banned bulrush?

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  4. Daniel30 August 2015 at 22:24

    Dear Azalea I like the way how you done paragraphs AWESOME STORY! I agree with you.
    from Daniel

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  5. Azalea2 September 2015 at 23:01

    Thank you to everyone who commented on my story!

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  6. Shavaun4 September 2015 at 01:05

    Dear Azalea I agree with you ! I like the way you did paragraghs
    from shavaun

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  7. Azalea15 September 2015 at 21:30

    Thank you Shavaun for saying you liked the way I did paragraghs in my story.

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  8. Azalea15 September 2015 at 21:36

    Thank you Daniel for saying that I did an AWESOME story. Thanks!

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  9. Azalea15 September 2015 at 21:38

    Thank you Trelise for saying that I have amazing reason. Thanks!

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  10. Azalea15 September 2015 at 21:43

    Thank you Reuben for saying that I have done great reasons! Thanks!

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  11. Azalea15 September 2015 at 21:47

    Thank you Elizabeth for agreeing with me that Bullrush should be banned!

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  12. Anonymous19 October 2015 at 22:50

    Dear Azalea
    you are right
    you will
    get serious brain ingury
    and I agree with you

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