Thursday 25 June 2015

A Winter Poem by Andrew

Winter is …

Freezing cold
Bears hibernating
Icy grass
Trees naked
Wet mud
Heaters on
Birds finding food
Time to get warm
Fingers numb
People freezing
Very very chilly

by Andrew Room 18

9 comments:

  1. I like the way you have described Winter in your poem, Andrew. You have used descriptive words like chilly and freezing. Well done!

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  2. Winter is all those things, Andrew. I love your story!

    Trelise

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  3. Well done Andrew. Good poem. I like it. From Josh L.S

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  4. Well done Andrew. Good poem. I liked it. From Josh L.S.

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  5. To Andrew
    I like your poem very much.Do you like winter?

    Elizabeth

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  6. It must be really cold in winter Andrew. Do you feel cold in winter.

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  7. I like your poem because all those words describe winter.How much do you like winter? by Daniel

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  8. I like your winter poem Andrew

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  9. love your story because all those words describe winter!

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